特别是结尾的部分
tè bié shì jié wěi de bù fèn
我自己不太满意
wǒ zì jǐ bù tài mǎn yì
您给我提提修改意见
nín gěi wǒ tí tí xiū gǎi yì jiàn
佟彤 是这样
tóng tóng shì zhè yàng
我手头呢 还有些工作要忙
wǒ shǒu tóu ne hái yǒu xiē gōng zuò yào máng
等我忙完了
děng wǒ máng wán le
一会儿慢慢给你看 好吗
yī huì er màn màn gěi nǐ kàn hǎo ma
那 您忙您的
nà nín máng nín de
我在旁边给您读
wǒ zài páng biān gěi nín dú
一片片绿草如茵的操场
yī piàn piàn lǜ cǎo rú yīn de cāo chǎng
和充满书香的教室
hé chōng mǎn shū xiāng de jiào shì
我觉得你没必要读完
wǒ jué de nǐ méi bì yào dú wán
等我忙完手头上的工作
děng wǒ máng wán shǒu tóu shàng de gōng zuò
一会儿会好好给你看的
yī huì er huì hǎo hǎo gěi nǐ kàn de
向老师 你怎么回事呀
xiàng lǎo shī nǐ zěn me huí shì ya
我让您看 你也不帮我看
wǒ ràng nín kàn nǐ yě bù bāng wǒ kàn
The beginning is well-written.
Could you please review all of it?
I'm not quite satisfied
with the middle part,
especially toward the end.
Please give me
some suggestions for improvement.
Tong Tong, it's like this.
I have some work to finish right now.
When I'm done,
I'll take my time
to review it properly, okay?
Then you can continue with your work.
I'll read it aloud to you.
The youthful days,
with grassy playgrounds,
tree-lined paths, and classrooms
-Tong Tong.
-full of the scent of books…
Tong Tong.
I don't think you need to read it all.
I already told you,
once I finish my current work,
I'll review it properly later.
Professor Xiang, what's wrong with you?
I ask you to review it, but you won't.
I offer to read it,
but you don't want to listen.
What are you so busy with anyway?
As a teacher,
shouldn't your students
be your top priority?
Tong Tong.
The beginning is well-written.
Could you please review all of it?
I'm not quite satisfied
with the middle part,
特别是结尾的部分
tè bié shì jié wěi de bù fèn
especially toward the end.
我自己不太满意
wǒ zì jǐ bù tài mǎn yì
Please give me
some suggestions for improvement.
您给我提提修改意见
nín gěi wǒ tí tí xiū gǎi yì jiàn
佟彤 是这样
tóng tóng shì zhè yàng
Tong Tong, it's like this.
我手头呢 还有些工作要忙
wǒ shǒu tóu ne hái yǒu xiē gōng zuò yào máng
I have some work to finish right now.
等我忙完了
děng wǒ máng wán le
When I'm done,
一会儿慢慢给你看 好吗
yī huì er màn màn gěi nǐ kàn hǎo ma
I'll take my time
to review it properly, okay?
那 您忙您的
nà nín máng nín de
Then you can continue with your work.
I'll read it aloud to you.
我在旁边给您读
wǒ zài páng biān gěi nín dú
青涩岁月
qīng sè suì yuè
The youthful days,
一片片绿草如茵的操场
yī piàn piàn lǜ cǎo rú yīn de cāo chǎng
with grassy playgrounds,
林荫小路
lín yīn xiǎo lù
tree-lined paths, and classrooms
佟彤
tóng tóng
-Tong Tong.
-full of the scent of books…
和充满书香的教室
hé chōng mǎn shū xiāng de jiào shì
佟彤
tóng tóng
Tong Tong.
I don't think you need to read it all.
我觉得你没必要读完
wǒ jué de nǐ méi bì yào dú wán
我说了
wǒ shuō le
I already told you,
once I finish my current work,
等我忙完手头上的工作
děng wǒ máng wán shǒu tóu shàng de gōng zuò
I'll review it properly later.
一会儿会好好给你看的
yī huì er huì hǎo hǎo gěi nǐ kàn de
Professor Xiang, what's wrong with you?
向老师 你怎么回事呀
xiàng lǎo shī nǐ zěn me huí shì ya
I ask you to review it, but you won't.
我让您看 你也不帮我看
wǒ ràng nín kàn nǐ yě bù bāng wǒ kàn
I offer to read it,
but you don't want to listen.
What are you so busy with anyway?
As a teacher,
shouldn't your students
be your top priority?
Tong Tong.